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Friendship Is Magic 01 by mauroz Friendship Is Magic 01 by mauroz
to publish it again but now corrected in parts. thank :iconataricat5:

and also for offering to :iconsebba93: above

This is the first chapter

here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1


MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7

MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

 

MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part2  here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

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:iconlunacorva:
Lunacorva Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
I've always liked this series.

That being said, I do feel the dialogue is somewhat awkward in a few places, likely due to it being translated from one language to another.

If you'd like, I can probably edit it further, make it come of more naturally.
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:iconremcmaximus:
REMcMaximus Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
Twilight: Whoa! I can't believe it I transformed.
Spike: Wow! That's awesome Twilight! How did that happen?
Twilight: I don't know, It just appeared out of thin air and something clung to my head.
Spike: What does that even mean?
Twilight: I do know one thing Spike, Something like this is not scientifically possible, therefore this headpiece is not scientifically possible!
Spike: Wait, so do you mean this could be magic?
Twilight: Highly doubtful Spike

Both: Next Time: Element of Magic!

Spike: So if it really is magic, does this mean you could pull rabbits out of your hat?
Twilight: Thats magicians, and thats not eve real magic!
Spike: So you DO believe in magic.
Twilight: Oh I give up!
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rana06 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
The last panel make my feel like I'm playing in a megaman.
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:iconaskerad:
Askerad Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
YEEEEES !

MAGICAL GIRL PONY AWESOMENESSSSS !!

omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry omg cry 
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TabrisLockhart Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
This is turning out very good.  I particularly like Pinkie's dilemma of "I just want to make people happy, but that sometimes makes me hard to be around."  That's kind of how I see her in the show and I am glad to see you used that here.
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:iconsarythewolf:
SaryTheWolf Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooo... Pony-magic based armour and cutiemarks. Also nice take on Pinkie Pie that most people find her over baring, probable realised given that the human world isn't as happy-go-lucky as Ponyville. Interesting characteristic with Apple Jack, I wonder what's making her that why, it not like her pony self.
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:iconchazleebear:
Chazleebear Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
What does it say?
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:iconspudman98:
spudman98 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
I'm getting a Saint Seiya/Sailor Moon vibe here
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:icontabrislockhart:
TabrisLockhart Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014
Same here, but the cool part is - it's actually WORKING
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:iconwulfgear:
Wulfgear Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
Interesting, I like you're designs and artwork.
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:iconendervice:
EnderVice Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This looks like a awesome comic.
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:iconreihkangul:
ReihkAngul Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That last panel: Cue the Anime's Main Theme XD
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
when I saw pinkie hugging spike like that and where his head is it made me think of this song if you are below 15 don't listen ok    www.youtube.com/watch?v=PpudnA…
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:iconlooneytunerian:
LooneyTunerIan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
This comic is amazing! :D

Ever considered doing a Motion Comic of this or even a Comic Dub? :)
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:iconjdueler11:
Jdueler11 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
The Narrator, also known as "Captain Obvious".
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:iconserefin99:
Serefin99 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Okay, so...

GO GO HARMONY RANGERS!(sorry I had to)
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:iconsilverfox713:
SilverFox713 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
I LOVE THIS COMIC XD 
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:iconmusicalartyanime:
MusicalArtyAnime Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
So...Luna would also be Twilight's sister right?
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:icondiscordantnoise:
Discordantnoise Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
You would think?Perhaps Twilight's parents could not keep her for some inexplicable reason (Confused )and this lead to resentment...Or maybe that's not it at all!Alucard Laugh 
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:iconspogo:
spogo Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pinkies got big boobs...
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:iconluvluvdarkness:
LuvLuvDarkness Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So, I'm not sure if anyone else noticed this (they probably did) but Luna says 'Il see, she must have spirit of harmony.' Just thought I should point that out! :) I'm sort of an editer by nature.
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:iconmkf2308:
mkf2308 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Wish I can find the image of the buildings at night...
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:iconshadowldrago:
ShadowLDrago Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
If Applejack si that tall, how tall is Big Mac? I think Rainbow is gonna end up like Edward Elric,the butt of many short jokes.
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:iconmattpwnsall:
Mattpwnsall Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Artist

Awesome :D


Also love the near-panty shots xD

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:iconbi0hero:
Bi0Hero Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Artist
(Thumbs up)
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:icontimhonor:
timhonor Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
My daughter is Loving this. Thank you for sharing.

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:iconkaiainazuma:
KaiaInazuma Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
quick question...
How old is spike? 
He seems to be around rainbow's age, maybe younger.
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:icontheoathseeker:
TheOathseeker Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
In this rainbow is a short 13 year old
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:iconkaiainazuma:
KaiaInazuma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
oh ok!
So then how old is Spike?
6?
7?
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:icontheoathseeker:
TheOathseeker Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Don't know many he will mention his age in the coming comics
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:iconkaiainazuma:
KaiaInazuma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
k thanx.
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:icontheoathseeker:
TheOathseeker Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
No problem
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:iconcrystalhanahm2013:
CrystalHanaHM2013 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Applejack isn't like herself.... She's reading a book n just ignore people....
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:iconahurdofbronies:
AHurdOfBronies Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Two tips.

1. Show, don't tell.
You don't need to have the narrator or the characters say things the reader would assume. For instance, "What's happened to me? My body feels strange" can be shortened to simply "What's happening?"

2. Keep things short and simple.

It would be more natural to say "Bearers" or "Spirit-bearers" instead of saying "The Bearers of the Spirits of Harmony." I'm pretty sure that we'd know which bearers they're talking about if they did that.
Likewise, "That could only mean that she too bears a Spirit of Harmony" can simply be "[unconscious because her]... She is another bearer."
If you can, try to use italics to add accents in sentences. It gives the reader the rhythm of each sentence.

Other than that, superb story-telling.
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:iconcake4fluttershy:
Cake4Fluttershy Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
If this is a tv series, I definitely won't watch it. But this is comic, this is art, therefore I will follow the series :)
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:iconbruiser128:
bruiser128 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
Like the series.
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is AMAZING!!! Really well drawn!!! :squee: :squee: :squee:
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:iconblue-lilly:
blue-lilly Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

the last few slides

reminds me of

Sailor Moon

...

is that just just me?

 

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:iconspaceman022:
spaceman022 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Nope,kinda getting flashbacks from the toonami days as well xD
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:iconledaverix:
LeDaverix Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

seriously it is really awsome.. i dont want to know how much time is in there :) ..

but why do i get such a Yugi-Oh Feeling somehow^^ .. maby the artstyle.

Go on, its great :)

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:iconsweetymimy22:
sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH !!! Have yot that as a movie or something . I like it really much . HAHAHA
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:iconxormak:
xormak Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW, that story is goooood O_O really great storywriting =)
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:iconalexander-yar:
Alexander-Yar Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Celeste is Daedalus from Sora No Otoshimono, right?
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:icontristanjsolarez:
Tristanjsolarez Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so far..... I'm hooked!! This is amazing!!
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:iconbloodnale:
Bloodnale Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow!
this is awesome

you really got me hooked on this story
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:icontigrospottystripes:
TigroSpottystripes Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I'm disappointed the transformation sequence was just a crotch shot... i was expecting at least one whole revolution around her and a bit more verticality in the movement as well...
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qaszxcvbnmklp Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Its probably because she hasnt completely transformed, she will once all the other elements are gathered, or found and used with the other bearers.
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:iconfunfunfunisfun:
funfunfunisfun Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. Nice work! <3
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ackbarfan5556 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
<font><font class="">Wow, perfect mix of FIM and Sailor Moon</font></font>
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ackbarfan5556 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Font class? I Don't know what the heck happened.
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